Follow Through - Revisions

After presenting our rough draft of our film, we received some valuable feedback of how we could and should adjust our techniques to ensure suitability for the requirements of this film project. It came about that one of the clips we've included in the film was not actually filmed by one of the candidates of this film. We came to the conclusion that redoing this clip with a tripod with a quick switch to a point-view shot would be our best bet to make things better for us. It also came up that the ending clip in our film has some wind noise in the background so we will work on fixing this mistake. The candidates furthermore decided that it would boost our product by adding in some voice over of some type. We realized we lacked a bit of dialogue, and we want to fix this. Getting words back that we did well but just needed to adjust and revise a few flips and filming techniques uplifted our confidence in our product and film making overall and we plan to do any revisions necessary. we are also interested in going back and implementing voice over in our movie, and possibly direct address. These changes will improve our extract by allowing the viewers to more fully know the theme we are striving for instead of having to interpret it through the characters' actions.